FIRST WRITING (scientific essay)

This was my scientific essay; I posted the first paragraph because it was a bit of a problem. The first issue was wasting time on topics I should have written about because I couldn’t figure out how to squander time and not even start on the essay. I was torn between numerous topics; for example, I wanted to write about covid but assumed everyone would; I considered writing on human evolution but assumed it would be too cliche and dull. and as I was going back and forth with numerous subjects, I opted to stick with the human evolution issue because I didn’t have enough time. I haven’t even begun looking for sources, which could take a long time. But, regardless, I began to write. I began by talking about a person who is relevant to the problem I was writing about, and then I began to find my way from there. The materials for the topic were easy to access, and the school library website was quite helpful. The next time I write, I learned to simply write anything that came to mind connected to that topic and start writing!!, which is something I would start telling myself during my writing career as a student.

GRAMMAR ERRORS

I didn’t take the time to double-check my essay again for grammar mistakes, so I made a lot of mistakes. Having grammatical mistakes in my writing was a little embarrassing to me because it shows that I can’t talk to people well. Like misspelled words and sentences that don’t make sense. Even though I use Grammarly, I was surprised to see mistakes like What was wrong? Then, when I got my assignment back, I saw that I had made a lot of mistakes with grammar. Because of this, I’ve decided not to rely on Grammarly as much as I used to. When I write essays, I should make it a habit to double-check my work. And making sure that I understand every word I write

RHETORICAL APPEALS

My ability to identify what the author is saying, as opposed to how they are delivering it, their goals, strategies, and appeals to the audience, came quite easily. For example, in the assignment about health care, we were supposed to explain how the authors appeal to their readers. The author’s data and survey show how they were gender inequity in the health care system. The author also uses ethos to convey the message to them so the rhetorical appeals were easy to pick up from the article but it was hard to understand the article because of the big grammar and how numbers and citations made it a bit difficult to understand. 

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